Thread: My turn, check out my Biz cards

I just finished them about 5 minutes ago, Please tell me what you think.......

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That second image in green is GORGEOUS!!!!

THANK YOU! Maybe I should have put the info on that?

No, no - keep the text on the "blue" side and leave the green picture to stand alone, it's lovely - you don't want any fussy text detracting from the purty hair. ..g.:

Gorgeous!

Originally Posted by wigglewhiz

No, no - keep the text on the "blue" side and leave the green picture to stand alone, it's lovely - you don't want any fussy text detracting from the purty hair. ..g.:

Yeah, what Wigglewhiz said.
Howdy stranger! Good to see you posting. Was just thinking about you earlier today...

Originally Posted by beafarhana

That second image in green is GORGEOUS!!!!

My favorite to!

Qamar

Beautiful! My god your hair is amazing!

Second picture of you is fabulous. Wigglewhiz has a good suggestion.

Looks great. Beautiful pics. A couple of suggestions. The squiggly thing on the first side goes over your hand. I would make it go behind your hand.

Second: why two numbers? Are you going to market actively in both area codes? If you are only going to be in one area code, you should just have that number.

And last...I think you should make the font that says belly dancer match the font that has the rest of the information.

Very fussy things. Most people won't notice or care. The graphic designer in me couldn't resist.

Great! I fixed the hand thingy, Yes I will market in both area codes as I will be staying in both one more than the other but the 704- quite often....

Also the Belly Dancer is in the same font, but I added a bevel should i add it to the e mails as well?

I think you should remove the bevel...but that is just how I do it for my logo, so I'm partial. ;-)

I think since you will be marketing in two areas, it might be a good idea to put which metro areas you serve...maybe next to the numbers? NC is big and both of those area codes cover huge parts of the state.

I think it looks great. I love the colors, the layout, the choice of photos. The only suggestion I have is for your name, since it is a script font, fix the spacing between the letters so that the swoop lines touch. You only need to fix it a tad so that the swoop lines touch.

I really like your new hair color. I agree with KDizzle, you need to use "kerning" to bring the letters closer together so the swoops touch. Looking good!

I love the second picture. Your hair looks beautiful.

That green picture really is breathtaking...

Annwyn, may I just say it's inspiring and wonderful to watch your marketing and dancing get more and more refined and beautiful over the years.

Can I have your hair????!!!!!

Originally Posted by wigglewhiz

No, no - keep the text on the "blue" side and leave the green picture to stand alone, it's lovely - you don't want any fussy text detracting from the purty hair. ..g.:

You're in New Zealand now?

What did I miss... ..c::

I actually vote for the green pic being the front with the info. It's alluring, people get a closeup of you and it sends the message that you're a belly dancer.