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02-04-2011 08:46 AM #31Advanced BHUZzer



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LOL. You always have some funny/witty comments in your posts

I agree about the position of the first picture. My facial expression captures the softness and love I'm looking for but not the rest of my body. I hesitated a lot before using this one but I'll at least see if I can manage to crop it nicely.
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I still think the black with the candle tray is very striking as a front. Then a softer back with a smile and veil would be lovely.
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So 4 months and a photo-shoot later, I think I'm finally satisfied with something!!! Let me know what you ladies think

The text placement still needs some tweaking (the word dancer is way too close to the right hand side!) But for now I'm happy with the overall result. I've seriously gone through 40 different options...!!! Please tell me its good
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I think it's beautiful! I *love* the new photo on the front.
Minor spelling correction: the back should read "enseignante" in the feminine rather than "enseignant".
Great work on the new design!
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Lovely! (As are all your photos). This card design shows a diversity of looks and skills, and the design is nice and clean. I like.
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I think it is lovely. You are just amazingly photogenic, wow!
Another small typo is that is says Oritental Dance instead of Oriental Dance. Would be sooo annoying to not see a stupid typo before it went to print, right?
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Hopefully all the corrections are made! Do you think the white font should be bold or not?? Bold makes the text clearer... not brings my eye to the picture rather than the text. What do you think?
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Re: Business Card Help :)
If we're nitpicking, I was taught that "award winning" should be hyphenated since both words are modifying "dancer" as a single concept ("award-winning dancer"), but that rule is pretty relaxed unless you're in a formal editing situation. It's not like people will get confused by what is meant in this particular case.
The photos are lovely, and I really like the front layout, but I think I might be tempted to adjust the line spacing at the top of the back so I could go up a point size or add more blackspace to the contact information. The part that tells how customers can contact you is one of the most important features of a business card, and I'm afraid the information looks a bit small and squashed at the bottom, compared to the text at the top.
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